Sunray by Pamela O'Brien

Someone once called me Sunray
I think that's one of the biggest compliments I ever received
Sunrays are charming, they warm your skin
and brighten the beautiful world for all to see.
Sunray's capture your eye and make it carry to the sky
and contemplate what brought it to be.
If a sunray could take physical form, I would want it to be me.
So thanks you, Martin V.

LinzAy (64.12.96.201) -- Monday, April 28 2003, 11:25 pm

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Aw!

luc (68.74.154.205) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 02:28 am

no title
cute.. :)

Martin Vann (65.57.63.231) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 10:53 pm

Sunrays, from a woman's heart, they touch & warm us all...,
Sunray;
Yes, your poetry warms the most delicate areas of our, god given skin. You are the heat, that feeds our romantic hearts. You cause the romatic mind to wonder, seeking love's treasure, the warmth of your breast, the moist, taste of your lips, you take our romatic hearts to a place, where we want to be. We feel your flesh, your tender touch, close to us. Your lips, so sweet, not asking, just giving. We feel you breathing slow, yet deep. Yes, your words, encompass us, spoken to all of us who care about love's sunrays, making dust particles dance, or just penetrating our hearts with warmth, Pamela, you are the sunshine, that all of us want, need,and seek you are the rays, of loving life. Without your brighness in our lives, no loving heart could take a breath, and slowly we would die. Thank you for the warmth of your sunrays, the warmth, of your heart.

MartinV

Pamela (194.125.158.11) -- Friday, May 2 2003, 06:42 pm

Um.....
I sure wasn't expecting that reaction! Very detailed Martin, I didn't know that my poetry meant that much to you in such a meaningful way.

Martin Vann (65.57.57.10) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 05:56 pm

Sunray, you write very well,
I like your poems because they are sincere and have a lot of meaning. Don't let my resonse frighten you, I just like your work and how your poems make me think and feel.

MartinV

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