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Goodbye
7 June, 2004
Author: Brenda Gisell Garza

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Look into my eyes
do you see me
am I visable.
Did you think that after you said no
that would disappear
well here I am.
Stronger than ever
once a stupid hurt little girl
now a strong indepented women .
No longer do the words
"let's just be friends"
run in my mind.
It's almost a new year
so you gotta be replaced.
So as I say goodbye
please do not try
to say hello.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tammy (66.38.4.228) -- Monday, June 7 2004, 06:33 am

Great Poem

WOW......this poem is truely awesome girly, great writing. I am enjoying your work!!!!!!
Tarna (4.227.41.117) -- Thursday, June 10 2004, 02:13 am

I like

This is a great poem showing your decision to move on with your life. Great read....
Victor (4.226.243.70) -- Sunday, June 13 2004, 06:25 am

wow

I love it even more.
Jan (12.36.116.208) -- Friday, May 6 2005, 07:17 pm

Great!

Wonderful poem!!!
brenda (4.227.126.191) -- Sunday, May 22 2005, 08:57 am

thank you

thank you jan
 
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