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Poison Paradise
5 June, 2004
Author: Cookey

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Poison paradise
The pills are ripe
Toxic eyes
I’m weak inside
Target me
Red and white
Stare at me
Until I’m blind
State the obvious
Make lies clean
Feelings are colorless
Invisibly seen

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tarna (4.227.41.117) -- Thursday, June 10 2004, 02:32 am

I like this one

it is almost two poems in one. First I read it at face value and then for some reason I read it every other line first starting line one and then line two.. It was really interesting and really good..
Cookey (220.244.147.238) -- Saturday, June 12 2004, 10:02 am

Thanks Tarna

ive never looked at it that way. thanks for showing me that. *smiles*
Manny (24.51.53.115) -- Friday, August 11 2006, 06:02 pm

Nice

I like it! ;)
Megan:) (24.19.216.81) -- Friday, April 24 2009, 12:53 am

awesome

this poem is really good! i am going to use it for my school project...thanks:)
 
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