Remade
9 June, 2004
Author: LinzAy
Crossing paths
I've stumbled into you
Nervous laughs
I'm not sure what to do
I don't know how to accept these things that have changed
These things inside my heart
Anything-Everything feels as though it's been rearranged
Everything inside my heart
So I...close my eyes...
...Inhale deeply...
...Exhale slowly...
...Try to find me...
And I...hold you close...
...I'm so afraid...
...I'm so different...
...I've been remade...
Stealing time
I'm a criminal true
It's prouldy mine
Every second spent with you
I don't know how to conform to all these things I feel
These things inside my heart
Anything-Everything feels as though it's so surreal
Everything inside my heart
So I...close my eyes...
...Inhale deeply...
...Exhale slowly...
...Try to find me...
And I...hold you close...
...I'm so afraid...
...I'm so different...
...I've been remade...
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Wednesday, June 9 2004, 04:37 pm Nice, the way you describe things.... This is like a photographic poem.... You captured everything! I love the picture in your poem... The way the words, are worded! What a genius you are! To find, love that almost makes you feel like flying! "Remade" Outstanding LinzAy!! Smiles, Meridian |
| LinzAy (152.163.252.196) -- Thursday, June 10 2004, 06:31 am Thankyou so much for the awesome comment! Glad you enjoyed! :) |
| everett (209.240.207.43) -- Monday, June 14 2004, 05:59 am im gonna have to agree with Meridian. very descriptive, it gives you images to see with imagination. nice job |
| LinzAy (172.201.194.101) -- Monday, June 14 2004, 06:56 am Thankyou very much Everett!! |
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