In Bloom by Jeremy Morzos

In bloom A song to a pretty tune
Wondering where you are crashing in the waves and
Down town in Atlanta The bright - light city
The days of my soul begin to grow and end hollowed
In bloom a sweet fragrance of cold emotions
Wondering where you are crashing in the oceans and
Dreams what it's suppose to be like to go back home
Surrender your heart my dear In bloom fragile
Smile for you are there dancing with the angels
In bloom of a shadows eye and bleakness of the sparrow
How I wish not to get thrown off track
I'm here to take it back my words
This I promise to you In bloom Gravity
We're falling down fallen angels are we
I just ask you listen to me
In bloom and sweet autumn rain
No more crying or your heart in pain
I like you this way from now on
I don't know what to write about
So I justify my love to you
In bloom In bloom In bloom In bloom
Echoes the snowy mountains of a dove
Deep inside my heart Am I sure of that this is true love???
Hands over my eyes screaming for attention
A distraction, accident and why in the hell does
Britney Spears have to be so damn pretty?
In bloom a sorry note written and grant me permission
To use this weapon A voice to sing and also eyes to see
And hands to feel and to know exactly what is real
This is the softer side of me with still a bit of edge
In bloom from the grave A flower to always remember
And be merry act silly guaranteed with my own
Passion's lap dance at Inserections
Flash back of things that happened in the past
Haunted by the fact of a untold mystery
This is more like a life story without all the blood
Dripping from the knife and gory lesbian scenes
Edited for televison the movie is actual reality
In bloom In bloom In bloom In bloom
Fade into the sky A colored world of goodbye horizon
In bloom only in Atlanta
Fly do we dare to try
Try and fly soaring so high and stop

Tarna (4.227.41.117) -- Thursday, June 10 2004, 12:33 am

hmmmm
I like the flow of the poem but am having a bit of trouble understanding why the repeating of the "In Bloom" is occuring. It almost seems out of place.. But I do like the rest of the writing..

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