You're More The Opposite
11 June, 2004
Author: LinzAy
You're such the opposite
Darker than I yearned for
Deeper than I intended
You're more, simply more
You're not at all what I wanted
Not my idea of perfection until I fell
Into a backwards dreams creation
Created by the opposite of the wishes I hopelessly threw into a well
I never imagined this is where I'd be
Here with you beside me
I never imagined this is what I'd wish to never end
This with you, my lover-my friend
You're quite the opposite
More unbearably irresistable than I yearned for
More painful yet curing
You're more, simply more
You're not at all what I wanted
Not my idea of a world complete until I fell
Into a backwards dreams creation of love
Created by the opposite of the wishes I hopelessly threw into a well
I never imagined this is where I'd be
Here with you beside me
I never imagined this is what I'd wish to never end
This with you, my lover-my friend
I never imagined myself, by the opposite, swept away
...But I'd have it no other way
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Comments on this poem/writing:
everett (209.240.207.43) -- Monday, June 14 2004, 05:51 am i loved the last line of this poem. perfect ending. ive had days where i would just sit back and imagine how i never would have thought i would be where i am now. if that makes any sense. heh...anywhoo...great work. |
LinzAy (172.201.194.101) -- Monday, June 14 2004, 06:49 am Yesyes, makes perfect sense Mr Ev! .....thankyou! |
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