Sad Saturday Night
9 June, 2003
Author: Ben Laney
I got some Annie's
Home grown macaroni
And I'm sippin' on a cold cup
Of grind your own coffe
Far away from the city lights
A dog is barking
The deep night is falling
And here in my darkness
I don't hear you calling
It's gonna be a sad, sad,
Sad saturday night
I had a feeling
You wouldn't be showing
Lately you've been reeling
Like a leaf that's blowing
Round and round on a hurricane flight
Well, I hope that later
You feel a little better
Then maybe later
We can pull it together
Far away from the city lights
It's gonna be a sad, sad,
Sad saturday night
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Pondering Red (65.94.135.186) -- Saturday, June 14 2003, 12:00 am I can picture and sense the scene....very well done... |
| Ben (67.24.39.126) -- Monday, June 16 2003, 07:49 am Thank you, Pondering Red!! This is obviously about someone who didn't show. Ha! Ha! |
| Brenda Michelle (64.12.96.170) -- Tuesday, June 17 2003, 01:12 am wow, it seems like i am there watching you be lonly on a saturday night. you have such great discription to your poems, i will enjoy reading the next! |
| cathy perry (67.202.13.243) -- Monday, June 23 2003, 04:35 pm i see my kids going through this on some weekends! |
| Ben Laney (65.142.45.243) -- Wednesday, July 21 2004, 11:52 am Brenda Michelle, I thank you sooo much for your encouraging comment, I really appreciate your kind words. I am pleased to know that it drew you in and made you feel like you were there watching me. Also, I apologize for missing this one somehow. I do hope you get to read this! Thanks again! Best Regards, Ben |
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