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First Step
30 May, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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I opened up my world to you and you destroyed it,
I opened up my heart to you and you chose to ignore it.

Im a kind and trusting person
and you took advantage,
any wish for you i would of granted.

You have taken my soul,
but dont worry im gonna get it back,
starting today as a matter of
fact.

Im gonna wash off all the negativity that you have draped me in,

its time to go through a cleansing period
and hang with like minded people,

im gonna change,this piece is the first step.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.232.40) -- Sunday, June 13 2004, 10:55 pm

Ben,

another magnificent read..i hope this was not gained thru experience..if it was ..i hope you the best of all worlds..your such a thoughtful person to go thru such ..your simply the best is what i percieve from readin' your poetry..your rollin'..
hushy (80.6.138.109) -- Sunday, June 13 2004, 11:04 pm

Terrie

thank you so much!i would hardly say best,you an meri have been a big insperation,and yes its what happened to me. love ben
 
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