We Are So Much Alike.. by Terrie*

i visualize watching you from afar
you shine as bright as a star
as I take a quick peek
the sight of you makes me so weak

watching you under that shady tree
waiting patiently for me
you have this precious look
I can read you like a book

we are so much alike in our thoughts
we may seem so far away
yet we are so content with very little to say
do we dare
let our hearts speak what we share?

you captured my heart
from the very start
because of you I am filled with inner peace
with the glorious feelings of the innocence
of this love in our friendship released

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Thursday, June 17 2004, 06:55 pm

Aww, ain't that sweet?
To have a friend, on the other side of the world..... Yet, you cannot see their face, but their heart says more than their mouth, in that the words shared, brings a smile across your face.... Such satisfaction....! Delightful poem Terrie*! Once again, you've shined!

Smiles,
Meridian

Martin Vann (63.185.65.127) -- Thursday, June 17 2004, 11:44 pm

Friends & A lover, One In The Same
Terrie,

As his love sleeps, still his heart beats for you, and as you take a peek, you see his heart as it beats for you, then, you begin to cry. Yes, you admit, you love him so, you dry your tears, can't have him wake up, and see tears in your eyes. Yet he does, wake up, sees you leaning, over him. Oh, my, the next tears that you cry will be all over him, as you cry, for all you can get from him.

Martin V

Terrie* (65.148.206.36) -- Friday, June 18 2004, 04:43 am

Meri & Martin,
thank you both for your understanding of my girly words :)

terrie (209.112.22.144) -- Sunday, June 20 2004, 02:49 pm

I got the wrong idea I guess
I didn't take this as a love lost, but of love found in a person you haven't met just corresponded with. Please let me know I'm sorry if I took it wrong.

Terrie* (65.148.215.188) -- Sunday, June 20 2004, 04:24 pm

Barb,
you are half right, it ISN'T about a lost love,
it is about a FRIEND whom is so much like a part of my own soul, NOT lovers but there is a connection ,an innocent kind Of love between two friends, when he hurts i can feel his pain, vice versa, he is a reflection of me..as i am of him..someone i will never tire of..
has a heart that is very trusting and so... full of love for all things that breath... he is too much like me...we practically share a very similar heart great observation..

barb (66.46.241.245) -- Sunday, June 20 2004, 07:15 pm

I haven't lost my mind yet
Your writing is easy for me to understand. well it's better to be half right,than all wrong.:))

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