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Light To Dark
19 June, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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Your like a extra brain cell
thats been programed in,
we met on thursday through your best friend
called lin,

we met on our own on sunday and walked in the park,
we were having such a good day time flew,
then it was dark.

We were both blossoming,
that you cant deny
i wasnt on any drugs
but i felt so high,

then it went from light to dark
and it wasnt just dark
it was pitch black,
from me creasing your body
to me asking for you to come back,

Life is funny,mine goes from light to dark.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Saturday, June 19 2004, 02:03 am

Dark to Light!

Oh my! How wonderful Hushy! Love contrasting in colors; your mind works like a computer chip! You must have a ton of gigabytes, because the depth your poem holds deserves to be published in a book of accomplished poets! Every poet has their unique style, and it shows through every person on this site! Great poem Hushy!

Smiles,
Meridian
Ben f (82.2.255.18) -- Tuesday, May 2 2006, 07:45 pm

miss meri

Just seen that you left a comment, and I cant believe that this has happened to me now! strange how things turn out! thanks for reading!
 
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