Feeling by Simik

Pain is a feeling i am no stranger too
depression is what i suffer through
Staying safely away from death
but the knife comes closer when i cannot rest
nobody would care too much once im dead
it would just be another day more perfect the the rest
so why end my suffering to make their lives better?
so deep is the headache that i eternally suffer
growing deeper with every letter
dont think i'll make it this time around
Feeling this pain is putting me down
the solution i can think of isnt the right one
but which is? who is to say
i cannot stay this way
if life is this painful to live day by day
why live it the way you do today?
love is a feeling im not familiar to
never felt it for anyone
not even those i owe it to
death is my enemy yet i need it so much
so why do i exist? nobody knows
nobody cares...
not even those who love me too...

Charmaine (220.255.59.67) -- Sunday, June 20 2004, 04:35 pm

Simik..
Great job..the words really bring forth the emotions. I know what you mean. Nice one.

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Sunday, June 20 2004, 05:32 pm

i agree
I've been down that road many time Simik... If I'd never gotten out of that horrible situation, I'd still be miserable.... I love the power of your emotion in this poem! Great job Simik!
BE ENCOURAGED SIMIK!
Smiles,
Meridian

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