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Facing My Diary
21 June, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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Ive wrote so many things in these pages
yet i have not faced my diary in ages,

These pages have broke up so many stages in my
life,
theres more bad then good,
and of course i have the 'what ifs?' and 'i should's',

my diary i think you will find i wont be opening you,
you have never been kind.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (63.184.96.89) -- Monday, June 21 2004, 04:29 pm

how true

In secret we write our thought,
Never to share with others so we thought,
To read about a life long ago,
We see our picture not as we'd like,
Keep writing on good and bad,
in 10 years you'll look and laugh,
great writing Hushy
hushy (80.6.138.109) -- Monday, June 21 2004, 09:59 pm

clive

thank you so much for your comment clive!im always intrested in what you have to say!
tahnks once again!
ben
Terrie* (65.148.213.116) -- Monday, June 21 2004, 10:29 pm

Ben,

sometimes our past
brings gifts and makes way for our present
and room for our future..
one just never knows
until we either let go
and move onto a fresh start
we owe it to our heart..
hugs/love
Martin Vann (63.185.64.203) -- Monday, June 21 2004, 11:05 pm

Hey, Hushy/Ben, look into your heart

Hushy;

What you write into your diary, the words of your heart, or pehaps its dreams. My sugesstion and no, I don;t konw it all, I'm far forom there. Yet, if as I'm sure, yiu write honesty into your diary, once you read, in the passing of time, do you see, perhaps, you need to change your heart, write about, what, your heart needs. If, you do, and you and your heart, speaks, what is inside, I;m sure you will be over-whelmed, for the the reply, in your diary. Just, tell it as it is, and answers to your questions, will come back to you, isn't that waht you are looking for, answers to your heart? Be bold, take no prisoners, only those, who love your heart, will come to you and if, like me, there will be only one. The one, you are looking for, the one I found, and will not share with you, she is mine. Sorry, my power failed, bou I hope, not, your heart.
hushy (80.6.138.109) -- Tuesday, June 22 2004, 10:33 am

thank you

thank you all very much for your comments,just to let you know this poem is not about me.

my diarys looking very bright,but i know for others its not so peachy.

thank you all once again.
 
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