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I've Become You
21 June, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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I've become you
I give aid
to the person on the streets

I'm the one to spoil
a child with love
I embrace a broken heart

I listen with an open heart
I give of myself
until I'm worn out

I get back on my feet
and start over again
I wipe a tear
of someone feeling so alone

I catch a smile of someone
trying so hard to keep from crying
I hear the voice of someone so true
as they sing a verse or two
to a family that has passed on

I am the heart that replaces
all that has gone to waste
I am here to wipe your tears
to soothe your sadden soul

I am here just for you
to hold you up
in the worst storm of your life
as you were once for me..

I am here where I want to be
because you are part of my past
a big part of my present
and a bigger part in my future

and for as long as you need me
I will be near
close your eyes
and I promise you
You'll find me there at your side...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (63.184.0.241) -- Monday, June 21 2004, 02:34 am

To Give

Angels come in different forms,
Angels come and go unoticed,
Angels are those who keep us alive,
Terrie you're the Angel in us all.
Thank You for being you
Hugs always Clive
Terrie* (65.148.213.116) -- Monday, June 21 2004, 10:13 pm

Clive,

a true friend you be
to stay close to me
no difference between you and i
our friendship will never die
thank you...hug/love
Cookey (220.244.147.238) -- Tuesday, June 22 2004, 10:36 am

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i love this poem. i wish i could have someone like this person expressed in the poem to help me all the time..:) cute little poems above too...
Terrie* (65.142.64.206) -- Tuesday, July 13 2004, 01:31 pm

Cookey,

sorry for the delay, i was stuck in traffic heh,thank you for your endearing comment, and yea Clive's poetry in his comments brings it out in me,can't let a moment slip by w/o returnin' the feelin' of the moment..he is the best friend to have around his comments are full of love and hugs..there is someone out there for you all the time..just stop....breath and look around...
 
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