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My Love, I Miss You
22 June, 2004
Author: Jeremy Morzos

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No one screams out loud eneough to hear
I'm saying how did the glass in the mirror break?
Massacre stoned giants fall one by one and in love alone
Murder condoned and blood colors the wall of sadness and
Happy songs twist of bones and a sip of water from a straw
Plates made in England and we don't have to pay no shipping
And handling Be careful it reads fragile The blood pours and
Drinks from your forbidden fruit tree in the shadow of soul and
Flowers dying wasted away and crying thinking about flying
I miss you my love and wondering why my love I miss you yeah
I miss you my love....

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Tarna (4.227.47.34) -- Wednesday, June 23 2004, 03:42 am

Wow

Amazing work... The metaphorical use for describing pain of missing someone is deep and very well described.. Great Job :)
 
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