Gentle Rain, Drifting Down
23 June, 2004
Author: ShyHeart
My flower garden, its starting to come around, gentle petals
I can see, them reaching for the sun, then, the evening comes
Star light winks, as the flowers, go to sleep, and the moon light
Says, wake up, my light is for love, do you want to, stay asleep?
Or, do you want to, let your petals, rise, like, a loving heart
For the first time, to see and feel, the moon light, that
Has, been sent to you. Are you afraid, my tender flower?
Of my moon-light, I shine over, all the seas, and now on you
A gentle rain, is slowly, slowly drifting down, as you rise, up to me
Do not worry, I was here, long before you, no pain, will you feel
A gentle rain, is slowly, drifting down, clean, as your heart
This is, the first time, your blossom, has bloomed, in my moon-light
Come morning, there will be no, morning, for what we shared,
In the moon light, we will share, in the sun light, I do not back away
I will always, be there, like the star light, and the moon light
Blossom little flower, in my tender arms, I will always..., be there for you.
"Can you feel, the gentle, rain, slowly, drifting down?
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Meridian (149.174.164.71) -- Wednesday, June 23 2004, 09:19 pm Hey Martin! It's good to watch the flowers bloom in the flowerbed or garden.... Watching the delicate rain, pour down, causing the plants to grow.... And I like the whole photosynthesis process.... Very good, the way you describe this poem.... As if nature is talking to the flowers; about not going to sleep! Your mind is working marvellously! Take care, Smiles, Meridian |
| Tammy (66.38.6.36) -- Thursday, June 24 2004, 09:41 am WOW this is so amazingly beautiful, There is so much beauty in your soul......your heart truely speaks to your pen!!!! GREAT WRITING, |
| Martin Vann (63.185.64.106) -- Thursday, June 24 2004, 02:08 pm Meridian and Tammy, As you know, I sometimes speak of passion in a more heated manner, howwver, when I see something delicate, it brings the "delicate Passion" side out in. Thank you for enjoying the poem, it came with out much effort, sometimes, it just flows, you both are excellent writers and understand. Thank You MartinV |
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