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My First Day
24 June, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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What will the other kids think of me on my first at my new school?
will they like me?or think im a fool?
please please like me!


DAY 1: 7.30AM and its only half an hour until im suppsosed to start,
im so nervous it feels like a marching band is playing in my stomach!

7.45AM: I've arrived at the school gate with all the other staff and parents,
they all seem to know each other so i keep quite,
i heard one woman talking about some ''revolutionary new diet''.

7.55AM: Time to show my face!
my hands on the door knob,
making it moist for the next person after me,
i open the door and....'hey!!you must be the new supply teacher,your class room is on the second floor number B5,
and be careful they can be monsters!'.

------- Author's Notes -------

i was trying to make the reader think the story was about a young boy or girl starting there first day at school,
dont know if it worked!
hushy

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Clive (63.184.96.11) -- Thursday, July 1 2004, 04:19 pm

it worked

you made it work with your words Ben good job
 
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