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This Is A Friend
25 June, 2004
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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People I see day in day out,
Smiles they pass and hello's always greeted,
Friends are in short supply,
People we know and are plentiful,
But this is a friend,
A friend is one on you can rely,
On night or day,
A friend is a secret never that will be told,
A friend will listen never to judge,
A friend is a cuddle and knows what it means,
A friend you can talk to for hours on end,
The talk will never be long enough,
A friend you can walk with as the miles pass by,
A True friend you can be with all of you're life,
That life will never be long enough,
So to you my friend I tell you now,
I'll Thank you always for being just you,
I'll Always be here for you my friend dear.

------- Author's Notes -------

We all have a friend in which we belong

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Comments on this poem/writing:

cindy gray-herber (216.31.82.125) -- Friday, June 25 2004, 09:17 pm

improvement

needs to rhythme a little more
Terrie* (65.148.215.235) -- Friday, June 25 2004, 09:26 pm

Clive,

friends are but a heartbeat away
many will stay while some go away
friends are hard to find
i am so glad i found mine...
loved it..hugs/love
Clive (63.184.1.219) -- Friday, June 25 2004, 09:30 pm

Cindy

Thank YOu for the comment,
Please take a moment to read my words,
To ryme I selom do,
Clive (63.184.1.219) -- Friday, June 25 2004, 09:31 pm

Terrie

A forever friend you are
barb (66.46.241.104) -- Friday, June 25 2004, 10:48 pm

my thoughts don't rhyme

writing what you feel doesn't rhyme. it's easy to make things rhyme but to get your feelings acrossed is hard to do. Jjust remember your thoughts don't rhyme. if they do then somethings wrong. Ha Ha nice poem clive no rhyming is what makes it feel real. not phoney.
Clive (63.184.0.156) -- Friday, June 25 2004, 11:54 pm

Your a gem Barb

Thank you for your comment oh wise one
barb (66.46.241.104) -- Saturday, June 26 2004, 12:18 am

new poem submitted called picky

I read the comment and wrote a poem I think you'll like it. I'm glad you think I'm wise. not bad thinking for a 92 year old eh Clive:))
Terrie* (65.148.207.83) -- Saturday, June 26 2004, 05:43 am

Clive,

'aye what can i say to know you is to love you!! in which i do ,thank you for being you my lovin' friend..hugs/love
 
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