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Weaknesses
26 June, 2004
Author: LinzAy

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You say you see me weak
Because when I should I can't speak
Because I can't say my thoughts instantly
Because I struggle to say what's inside of me
I guess everyone has a weakness of their own
That somethingin life has caused to grow
I'm aware that I'm awful at letting my feelings show
It's a fear I must work on - this I've known
Please don't push at me and call me weak because there's something about me you don't understand
Fears aren't something for others to reprimand

You see weakness in me - and I in you
One sign of trouble and it's goodbye to you
You'll pack up and leave if there's a struggle - big or small
That hurts considering I'm more than willing to go through it all
I guess you too have a weakness of your own
That experiences and examples in life have helped to grow
But to just give up on something so quickly
It hurts to know you'd give up on me so easily
So, please don't reprimand my weaknesses when you're weak too
You'd like me to gain strength...what about you?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.113.138) -- Monday, June 28 2004, 05:43 pm

I see where you're going

Everybody makes mistakes.... I see what you're talking about LinzAy.... You're saying, don't get end the relationship, just because you might be in the wrong, in a certain situation.... We're only human..... Super poem on Weaknesses!

High five!
Smiles,
Meridian
LinzAy (68.50.131.27) -- Sunday, July 11 2004, 11:16 pm

Meridian...

Heh:) Thanks..............yea, everyone does make mistakes and everyone does have their own certain weaknesses..part of life i suppose
 
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