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D.e.a.t.h
28 January, 2004
Author: Bizza

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I know you are hurt I see the pain,
I know how you feel because I am insane.

I watch the pain grow everyday,
But I dont really know what to say.

You think to yourself that I dont care,
And I know I have caused alot of pain that you bared.

I did not mean to hurt you,
but I dont know what to do.

You say I can talk or say anything,
But you would not understand what I am thinking.

Last night I wanted to die so bad,
I want to I cant it makes me so mad.

God I my life and things I have done,
I cant change anything especially one.

Dont you think my life alreday sucks,
And you just dig my hole deeper as I get more stuck.

Nothing can change my past,
As I realize now my heart beats fast.

D.e.a.t.h calls me closer whispering your next,
I can only hope I will be so blessed.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 02:22 am

i no wut u mean

i really love this poem its so true.....
crystal (156.63.169.2) -- Friday, May 7 2004, 05:17 pm

it's sad

your poem is realy touching i use to write poems just like dat. i think if that poem is true then guys should go to hee
bizza (68.100.180.56) -- Thursday, January 27 2005, 10:45 pm

Thanks

Thanks for commenting on my poem I appreciate it very much..
 
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