I Thought You Were The Best by Terrie*

what more can I say
my feelings you hurt so bad
you gave me something special then took it all away
you left my heart feeling so sad

I pretend I do not care
for the little that we shared
I know you felt it too
I meant something to you

I was, but a phone call away
to listen to what you had to say
if only you extended your hand
you knew I'd understand

we come to a crossroad of change
feeling so awkward and strange
what happened to the trust
was it all based on friendship or lust?

you bruised my heart
you bruised my soul
you tore my life apart
just to make yours whole

you made me happy for the moment
now you put me thru such torment
I thought you were ultimately the best
I honestly thought you were different from the rest

awhile back a friend had asked me to write a poem for some one and w/the emotions that she generated through tears she displayed i came up with this..
i know many of us have felt this very same way.....

Hushy (80.6.138.109) -- Monday, June 28 2004, 07:53 pm

Terrie*
hey terrie* this was so powerfull,
loved it!
ben
x

Terrie* (65.135.87.104) -- Monday, June 28 2004, 09:13 pm

Ben(Hushy)
wow!! thanx.....F.Y.I after she presented this to him...he felt like scum...but...they ended up together later when he felt her pain... HUGS/LOVE

Emilee (12.223.196.102) -- Monday, June 28 2004, 11:40 pm

wow
loved this one terrie*! i can so relate to your friend's feelings in this poem! great job! God Bless~emilee

Terrie* (65.148.211.173) -- Tuesday, June 29 2004, 11:33 pm

Emilee,
glad you enjoyed this , i extend my heart to you for relating to her feelings, cause when i felt them i burst in tears..

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved. No part of this website, including all pictures and written words, may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without permission of the original author of the work. All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner. All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com so the proper person may be notified.