Abandoned by ErinBrenna

You were the stone in the wind.
I couldn't resist the longing in your eyes.
You were the rock in the sea.
I couldn't escape the allure of your lies.

A love refused.
The yearning to be used.
These moments will leave us no place to stay.
To be with me.
Would mark your tragedy.
Just walk away.

Cunning and elusive.
I knew your treacherous heart.
Passionate and fierce.
I died when we were apart.

A love refused.
The yearning to be used.
They tore me away from you.
To be with me.
Would mark your tragedy.
Abandoned love the night fell to.

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Wednesday, June 30 2004, 11:38 pm

I get it
Love forbidden! Knowing it's wrong, but you ache when you two are seperate. Very good choice of words, I love it ErinBrenna!

Smiles,
Meri

Clive (63.184.96.11) -- Thursday, July 1 2004, 04:07 pm

my type of words
ErinBrenna agree with Meri a very good choice of words that carry so much meaning.

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