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Tomorrow
27 January, 2004
Author: Bizza

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I want you to look deep in my eyes,
And tell me you will never lie.

You know you have my heart.
But I dont want I am not ready to start.

The feelings get so strong.
I cant love it just feels wrong.

The ony person I ever loved,
Left me here and gave my heart a shove.

No matter how long it's been,
I cant it hurts when I write my feelings with this pen.

The past has left me sorrow.
How can I deal with the late tomorrow.
When Tomorrow never comes.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Lady-C (10.12.15.53) -- Wednesday, January 28 2004, 12:53 am

great!!!

i think this poem was really great u did a nice job i hope u dont waste ur great talant keep it up!!!!
bizza (206.148.228.54) -- Friday, January 30 2004, 05:38 am

Thanks

Thanks!! I Really Appreciate your comments.
 
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