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Alone
6 July, 2004
Author: La_LonLey_Dreamer

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I think im better, I no longer need you, my past was razors anything sharp to get rid of all my thoughts.
I thought i was threw, but you knew it was too good to be true. Alone again, I see you looking up at me overwhelmed i'm thinking just one more.But one led to two, three four five more. I think if God loves everyone why do i feel abandoned and alone? I look into my reflection and no longer see the girl i used to be. My blood dripping, for the first time I'm scared.Crying I fall to the floor Begging God please help me I love you, but it seem as if you don't love me I feel faint, i try to get up but i can't. I know i'm losing grip slowly dieing. I know i'll forever be searching for someone to love me.

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Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Monday, July 5 2004, 10:19 pm

you're loved

Hey La_LonLey_Dreamer!! You're loved by so many, you probably don't even know it... This is indeed a lovable site, with lovable people... So we love you... Nice way to describe your inner feelings, letting someone know the pain inside.... I hope you don't cut yourself in real life.... Please don't... I'm begging you not to.... Keep your head up La_LonLey_Dreamer, it's natural to feel alone sometimes...

Take care and have a glorious day!
Smiles,
Meridian
La_LonLey_DreamEr (65.4.227.24) -- Tuesday, July 6 2004, 02:58 am

THankZ.....

ThankZ for your words they help alot but i'm sorry to say that i do sometimes cut myself but i'm getting better each day and learning to cope with who i am So thanks ...
XoXo LA_LonLey_dReamer XoXo
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