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The New One
13 July, 2004
Author: Crush Me

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As you walked into the room, i took the second glance.. i wondered who you were and took the chance. I went up an talked to you, and knew you felt the same. We have talked ever sence now, but i dont think your telling it all. I knew when we met you wernt totally free. but all because of me now you are. I dont want you to come to me, then change your mind. im afraid of getting hurt, because im coming to a new love.. my heart is still mending what the past has done. I know i have feelings inside for the new one.. and you like me too. You tell me that im beautiful and how you miss me, but do you tell you past love the same? i heard your side of the story and hers. two different things? but which does the heart believe? its telling me to take it east, and to protect myself.. but its saying dont be shy- go for the guy! he is very nice, and keeps me close in his arms when were together.. but when were not are you with the past? do you tell her things that i should know? i dont want my heart to get broken, so here is my chance.. do i take the risk and end up with either an new close future and some happiness, or risk it all to get lost in you confusion?

------- Author's Notes -------

Just a story of my last week, enjoy!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Jeremy Morzos (150.182.180.162) -- Tuesday, July 13 2004, 02:27 am

Yeah

This is excellent work keep writing
I really like it a lot
Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Tuesday, July 13 2004, 03:37 am

good question

What a good way of writing your thoughts! Fear of your heart being broken, and your happiness turning to sorrow... Don't we all feel like this! I felt like this with a person I know.... I waited the matter out to get to this person, much longer than normal, after an old friend betrayed me... And sure enough, he was just as bad....
Laugh out loud! Great work!
Great job Crush me!
Smiles,
Meridian
 
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