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Missing You
13 July, 2004
Author: LinzAy

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And I'd describe it as a numbing emptiness that flows through my soul
A numbing emptiness that's only filled by you
And even though I hear your voice, not until I hold you again will this numbing end
Not until you hold me again will this emptiness be filled
I miss you
And the time passed is only a day - with so many more to go
A whole new sort of torture for me

I long to call you every minute of each hour just to know we're somehow physically connected, if that's what it could be called
But I resist
Somehow I manage to hold myself back
Somehow

A tear sheds for every moment that's filled with an overwhelming need for you
I miss you so much already
I can't wait to be in your arms again
...I can't wait

------- Author's Notes -------

"I missed you before we even left with the thought that I might stay, and I was still able to hold you, and kiss you, and see you....Imagine how much I miss you now"

I miss you Jeff

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Tuesday, July 13 2004, 06:37 pm

ooo wee

Missing him, hungering for him, longing him, wanting him.... Oh wow! I hope he hears your cry... Look at me sniffing LinzAy... Man, 24/7, you ache for him! Fantastic poetry Lady L!

Smiles,
Meridian
LinzAy (68.50.131.27) -- Tuesday, July 13 2004, 10:41 pm

Meridian

heh heh....yes yes...I miss him a lot. Glad you could feel it:)

Thanks:)
Lindsay
LinzAy (68.50.131.27) -- Friday, July 16 2004, 11:24 pm

Lady

wow...I just realized that you called me Lady L.....Martin use to call me that! that's kinda cool.....
brandy (66.157.35.198) -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 03:19 am

hey

hey ur poem is awsome!!
LinzAy (152.163.252.196) -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 07:48 pm

Brandy

Hi! heh, thanks vedy vedy much for the comment!
brandy (68.222.18.115) -- Wednesday, September 1 2004, 10:25 pm

hey

your welcome
spc Tony Hill (214.13.177.223) -- Friday, September 3 2004, 02:59 am

liked it i can relate to it alot

nice poem dont laugh i know this might sound weird but i call my wife 2-3 times a day just so i can still feel like im with her everyday although the truth is i still have 6 more months left b4 im with her im stuck here in the sand box for just a little bit longer but all i hope for is that it will make us stronger
LinzAy (198.81.26.42) -- Monday, September 27 2004, 05:07 am

SPC TONY HILL

wow...i didn't know I had another comment on this poem! sorry for missing it! I didn't laugh at that, Jeff and I would talk AT LEAST 3 times a day...nothing to be embarrassed about :) Thanks for the comment :) ...........sand box?
 
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