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That Girl's Gone Online
14 July, 2004
Author: Ben Laney

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We used to spend time talkin'
face to face
Back before she discovered
cyberspa..a..ace
Then all of a sudden
life just changed
Now I have to be contented
with second pla..a..ace

'Cause that girl's.. gone online
She's on her computer now
all the time
Got a busy signal buzin' in my ears
It's really blowin' my mind
'Cause that girl's...gone online

What ever happened to
old school romance,
Getting out in the moonlight
walkin' and holding hands?
We've got e-mail now
and text messaging
But I miss her warm arms
wrapped all around me

'Cause that girl's.. gone online
She's on her computer now
all the time
Got a busy signal buzin' in my ears
It's really blowin' my mind
'Cause that girl's...gone online
Now ain't that a cryin' shame?
Oh, that girl's...gone online

------- Author's Notes -------

CYBERSPACE, CYBERSPACE. Yes, it is an amazing place, but not as amazing as a human face!
Love & Whirled Peas,
Ben

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Blue_Angel (204.112.168.155) -- Thursday, July 15 2004, 07:08 pm

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Good poem, Ben Laney!
Ben Laney (65.148.213.26) -- Thursday, July 15 2004, 09:56 pm

Blue_Angel, Thank you for......

Blue_Angel, Thank you sooo much for your your short but sweet comment. I am really glad you like this writing!

Best Regards,
Ben
Stacey (69.137.26.123) -- Friday, July 16 2004, 06:35 am

Cute...

I really enjoyed this one Ben.. and yes,there really is soo much truth to it.
Keep writing.. I love reading em -Stace
Ben Laney (65.148.230.154) -- Friday, July 16 2004, 07:20 am

Stacey, Thank you for...

Stacey, Thank you for your encouraging words, I really appreciate them. I am glad you enjoyed it and let me know that you did!

All The Best,
Ben
 
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