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Understanding The Void -
15 July, 2004
Author: Demon_99

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Twisted thoughts of a deranged mind
Echos of countless voices stirring in the back of my head
The room swirls and changes shape, color distorts all goes silent
A shape forms slowly, forcing focus onto a centeral point
Mirrors that show no reflection, illusions of a pointless life
Darkness embraces, followed by light
Smoke rises, nicotine hits the blood
All things return to normal, back to writing.

------- Author's Notes -------

Writers Block and lack of cigarettes encouraged this number.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (68.50.131.27) -- Friday, July 16 2004, 06:45 am

,,,,,,

Definitely see how the cigs inspired this one. Nice job!
Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Friday, July 16 2004, 08:05 pm

hahaha

Insomnia! Lack of sleep Demon_99! Nightquil helps me sleep! In all seriousness, great writing....
I hope you enter this poem into a contest, as well as your others.... You are truly blessed with such talent....

Good job Demon_99, good job!
Smiles,
Meridian
Demon_99 (68.96.11.191) -- Saturday, July 17 2004, 07:04 am

:D

thanks for the delightful comments.
~Demon~
Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Saturday, July 17 2004, 11:06 am

oh yeah

I enjoy reading every one of your poems! I'm glad that you understood the void Demon_99!
 
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