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I Love You The Most
17 July, 2004
Author: Ben Laney

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I like hot coffee
with Kahlua and cream
The sweet light of morning
dawning in my dreams
I love bright children
their miracle smiles
But I love you the most
Pleeease...stay a while

I like new people
I love my old friends
I like train whistles
blowing around the bend
But I love you, Darling,
more than anything
I love you the most
Ooooh, hear my heart sing

You say you love me
so show me how much
Sweet Baby hug me
let me feel your touch
And I'll repeat
what you already know
I love you the most
I...I love you the most

------- Author's Notes -------

This is one of my early attempts at writing a love song. What WAS I thinking? Haa! Haaaa! I hope you like it! ***Ben

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Saturday, July 17 2004, 12:57 pm

coffee and creme, you say

Wonderful! Strawberries, peaches and cream, reminds you of love with your woman eh? Sweet and fruity! Yeah! Wonderful words! You make anyone smile with the charisma you possess!

Great poem intitled, "I Love You The Most"!
Smiles,
Meri
Ben Laney (65.136.6.197) -- Sunday, July 18 2004, 02:45 am

Meridian, That's HOT coffee and SWEET..

Meridian, That's HOT coffee and SWEET cream! LOL! Thank you sooooo much for your very encouraging words, I really do appreciate them. I am happy you like this one!

Warm Regards,
Ben
 
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