Hide With In I Already Know Your Lies
20 July, 2004
Author: Jackie C
I'm starting to wonder
About your lost soul my dear...
You seem saddened
And hide in fear
Know one knows you hide but me
I can tell no matter what you think
You say I can't change things
You say I don't try
I do try
You just wont let me
You tell me your hurt
When I try to talk about it
You just shut me out
I can't help you if your
Not willing to open up to me again
But I’ve tried and know I just cant seem to win
You seem to think I'm the greatest sin...
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Comments on this poem/writing:
Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Tuesday, July 20 2004, 04:32 am Just like the two-headed Dragon, off of "Dragon Tails", who says, "Looooooove it"! I'm just like her, because I love it too.... I love your poem, I love the way your mind works! LOL! I hope this person opens their heart for you to come in, and help them out!!! Very good Jackie C! You've captured everything! Smiles, Meridian |
Martin Vann (63.185.65.115) -- Sunday, July 25 2004, 06:18 pm Jackie,I make no excuse for this sole, you write about, still, I know, one can have a heart so full, of love and, having giving it once, and had tossed a way, even a loving heart, can be afraid to try again. Someone, I truly love, told me, "I understand, but, then, I don't, all I say, is my heart has patience. Now, that is love, even if, it sounds one-side, I call that love, at least there is one heart, that knows what its wants, and will wait, for that loving, will arrive, love takes, a lot of patience. Super Expression Jackie. -MartinV |
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