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Ups And You Bringing Me Down
20 July, 2004
Author: Jackie C

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You cut my down
And I pick you up

What a relationship we have
It's so f*cked up

You push me down
I pull you up

Why do I stay around you
You’re a waste of my breath

You beat my life to sh*t
I bring you happiness during strife

Why the hell are you so deceitful
You lying cheat

You hurt my soul when you push me
And I mend your wounds

You stealing son of a b*tch
Why do I put up with such sh*t...

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Crush me (141.158.183.223) -- Tuesday, July 20 2004, 08:02 pm

This was very deep and pretty!

this poem was totally great, it really went into my soul and it was very deep! i can totally relate, its like sometimes you cant escape from the thing you love, even though its killing you and bringing you down! down worry, someday it will finally stop! it just takes time..
 
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