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Longing To Hear Your Voice In The Wind
21 July, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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sitting alone day by day
waiting to hear
something new
not one word
is heard or shared
my thoughts go back
into my shell
I promise myself
never to look back
for I know in my heart
I won't get the answers
I want to hear
my heart will never heal
ask God for the strength
so when I return
I can be on my own
to learn to breath..
on my own..
I'm having great difficulty
trying to stop loving you
and accepting that you are gone

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Thursday, July 22 2004, 06:13 am

baby steps

Taking each step slowly, sluggishly, as if I'm an infant, helps me recover from the most difficult things in life.... Sometimes, like you said, moving on, can be one of the toughest things to do, but it's worth it.... Wouldn't wanna stay there for an eternity, haha... But I enjoyed and loved the way you describe things in your poetry! Keep on going, and going, and going! LOL! smiles, Meridian
Terrie* (65.147.241.218) -- Thursday, July 22 2004, 07:38 pm

Meri, sweet lil Meri..

Glad ya enjoyed this...yea to move forward..becomes very difficult in the beginning, especially when someone whom means the world dies ...i have many poems saved on drafts.i share them w/my best bud he makes the selections, i know i probably throw so many folks off.."she's in love" "she's sad" etc..my favorites are reading some body elses words...especcially if i can put myself into it..at the moment i read it..and i can easily do that...smile back at ya..
brandy (66.157.35.198) -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 04:05 am

hey

you know i am there now i am trying to face the facts that my ex is not coming back but i just donno how to exept it!!!! this is a great poem
Terrie* (65.148.209.134) -- Wednesday, September 1 2004, 02:10 pm

Brandy, no matter in what manner love is lost...

sweetie, facing the facts are a battle in itself...i hope your heart guides you to where you need to go,and what you need to know.. may you still become friends if nothing more..your heart will let you know..if you need expert advice seek one of a higher power..as i did..i'm still battling the trying to let go part... i still feel/see his love everytime i see my children...thanx..and good luck sweetie..
 
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