Hands I Long To Hold by LCN

Tonight I'm dreaming of you darling and how sweet that it would be.
If I could hold you in my arms and end some of this misery.
Your eyes they shine like diamonds, Your hair is bright as gold.
You have sweet lips I dream to kiss and two hands I long to hold.
But what I'm dreaming of darling for me will never come true.
For you already have some one who shares my dream with you.
So I will just live my life lonesome and have heartaches untold.
And always dream to kiss your lips and your hands I'll long to hold.

Tarna (4.226.171.1) -- Monday, July 26 2004, 09:28 am

Romantic
I really like the romantic feel of a passionate love in this one. Superb poem

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Monday, July 26 2004, 08:11 pm

the ending
The ending is truly great LCN! Someone who already shares that bond with the one you love, breaks your heart in two eh...Very elaborate, enjoyed all 8 lines..... Smiles, Meridian

KitKatrina (68.189.46.16) -- Saturday, October 23 2004, 08:09 pm

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I've been waiting for you to write again. I enjoy reading your poems. They are so sweet and filled with emotions. Great job on this one especially. Keep it up, and keep posting. Cause you'll always have at least one person to read them...god bless..

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