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Dance Of Despair
27 July, 2004
Author: Vampyr Tears

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Twirl me around
Watch the colors swiftly fall to the ground
It's all so surreal
Just some fanciful dream
But please leave me be
I want to remain in this peaceful land
Amongst green groves
Blue skies and
Gentle songs
A place where I won't need your faulty words
Promises always crack
My trust in you slowly crumbled
You are my one disappointment
A mistake too lovely to erase
As memories flood my mind
Those moments when we loved
When everything seemed possible
The dreams of the young and foolish
Just cause more hurt
And that pain will linger, because I don't want it gone
If this is the last time we dance
Lets make it all count
Just twirl me around

------- Author's Notes -------

Ugh. I'm terrible with this category stuff. I never know where to put it. There sould be a category for that. :)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Monday, July 26 2004, 10:44 pm

super cool

Dance of Despair turn Vampyr Tears around.... The colors of discontentment, is never a lovely ride for me.... Depression is like a roller coaster ride sometimes! Perfect way of describing your feelings! I love this poem! Smiles, Meridian
Martin Vann (63.185.64.1) -- Tuesday, July 27 2004, 09:18 pm

John Wayne, Into every life, some rain must fall

Vampyr, When the wind blows, autumn leaves, dance to the ground, when the rain falls, upon a window pain and with your loving finger, you touch a drop of rain and see it dissapear. Don't cry, though you feel, you, have just shattered, another tear drop, falling from you heart. There is always, another season, winter will, go away. So, let you heart dance, let the rain drops fall, for "without some rain," there would be nothing at all. Beautiful Poem, -MV
Vampyr Tears (64.110.201.153) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 04:34 am

....

That is beautiful. Thank you.
 
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