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Rules And Laws
28 July, 2004
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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If we don't follow rules and laws.
Our life is full of flaws.
I see people with problems
they don't know why.

I can hear why, bad attitude,
disrespectful, blaming every one
for their neglect.

To me they make
their own problems.
Not following rules and laws,and
being neglectful to minor things.
Which will turn minor problems into
major problems.

Make sure you take care of the
little things, so they don't turn
into big things.

Making your life FLAWLESS.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Thursday, July 29 2004, 05:45 pm

Brilliant!

This is brilliant Barb. Your words ring out with truth...and I love your ending line. Well done!
barb (66.46.230.241) -- Monday, August 2 2004, 07:06 pm

thanks cap

I've heard so many brag about mouthing off to a cop and then they wonder why they get ticketed duh
T (65.114.92.238) -- Tuesday, November 7 2006, 08:16 pm

Well Done

My students could use memorizing this.
 
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