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Cry Me A River
30 July, 2004
Author: Moonstarshine

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Its one of those nights...
nothing looks and feels right.
There's smell of rain in the air
but my heart is in despair.
He's far away..
but seems oh so near to me
in my thoughts so close forever he will be.
I reach out my arms
and touch his shadow
that lays warm still against my skin
his whispers of sweet nothings
slowly breathing life
into my aching soul
memories unfold..
like timeless treasures
preserved with love
these everlasting dreams
will see me through.
It rains now soft
in my heart..
I turn over to hide my face
in my arms I self embrace
holding the pillow tight
I think I am going to cry me
a river tonight....

------- Author's Notes -------

Its tough when you miss someone and I miss him so very much

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.211.228) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 02:48 am

Moonstarshine, i feel everyone of your words.

i feel them deep in my heart,for my true love also lives so far away.. ohhh i feel your voice so close to my heart, your heart feels empty , yet so heavy huh?your heart beat feels like w/o him it tends to forget to send that signal to beat or to breath doesn't it?..tough yes indeed..i so look forward to him coming home straight into my arms where love he knows will greet..lovely poem..i hope you wrap your arms around your true love as i will mine when pretty soon we will meet..
Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 06:01 pm

A puddle of love

Raindrops beating in the window of your heart eh? I hope he tunes in to the weather report, and comes home.... Absolute perfection when you wrote this!!! Smiles, Meri
 
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