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Hate
30 July, 2004
Author: Paul Geurin

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You take and take, will it ever end?
with your heart full of hate you take all that I am
You can stop at any time

For you see!
You have already taken all that I am
When you took my little girl
the apple of my eye
You have turned her against me
with all of your lies
You even tried to take our Son's love away from me
I am so glade he could see through your lies
Not as young as our little girl
Who you hold hostages for your ransom to spend
You want what I don't have, you ask for more money
As I give all that I can
I get up and go to work every day
I go with out lunch and do what I can
I save what money, I possibly can
So I will have money
to spend on our little girl on my weekends

What more will you take, How much more can I give
You have everything that I worked for
Twenty-three years worth in all
And you took all my dreams when you turned our little girl
with all you hate and lies
All I can say to you!
GET A JOB AND PROVIDE FOR WHAT YOU TAKE!
She needs Love and a Mother
Someone to take care of her, not let her run wild
I think you need parenting 1-o-1
She is twelve years old, Not an adult
She stays with others, your friends just like you!
One day you will be judged for what you do!
GOD ALMIGHTY WILL JUDGE YOU!
You are the one that doesn't care
Just leave her with anyone you don't care
as long as you can go out and have a good time
When you know, How much I love her
I would gladly take the time!
You could go as you please!
Just please! give me a little more time
with our little girl
You see you can hate me if you please,
Please just don't use her as
a game piece to get at me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LCN (65.40.205.97) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 06:39 pm

Very Good!!

I realy love this poem. It has such feeling. You know one day both son and daughter will grow up and realize what a great father you are. Just keep your head up and don't let the mother get you down.
anonymous (64.216.166.138) -- Monday, September 8 2008, 10:24 pm

Awesome

This poem hit hard at home.. my mom tried to do the same thing... but one day i woke up and relized what a daddy and daughter have is something so special that it cant be replaced... from someone that has been through that... she will wake up and relize that a daddy is the greatest thing to have and will figure out all the lies told!!!! just have faith...
 
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