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Because Of You
10 June, 2003
Author: Alisa

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with this razor
my arm i slice
the blood starts to flow
it feels so nice

My suicide letter
i write for you
i feel no remorse for what i do

its splatterd with blood
and wet from tears
sloppy from nerves
and stricken with fear

my wrists are next
there ready to go
my heart starts to slow
as my eyes start to close

my breath starts to weaken
as my knees hit the floor
my body falls limp
and because of YOU
My life is no more

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ash (65.73.59.236) -- Monday, June 30 2003, 11:51 pm

WoW!!

I think this is a great poem but i hope u do not speak of this from experience.
lil lu-lu (216.28.152.111) -- Tuesday, July 1 2003, 03:22 am

great

i love this poem it is soo good. ure a good writer
alisa (216.39.201.191) -- Friday, November 21 2003, 01:47 am

thanks

thank u, im glad u like it, ill try and post somemore later on. i do speak of this from experience though... but i stoped with all that.. its just wasnt worth it. :p
Susy (66.94.9.52) -- Wednesday, February 6 2008, 04:39 am

Great writeing

Thank god u stoped those ugly thouth
 
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