You Make Me So Complete.... by Terrie*

With his hands
he etched these feelings
upon my heart

Grace wrapped in glory

he shines on me
like a heavenly star
a sign of his affection

a perfect love felt in my heart

his love
a blessing a sweet melody
of a lovers song

that can only be spent and never bought

his touch
a dust of the moon
a burning that glows with pure passion in my heart

a love made possible from the heavens above

he makes me so complete
a majestic prayer answered
that entered my life
more so from many miles away

his faith so divine

something to believe and hold on to
a forever hug from God
a shelter from the storms

yes my baby is very close to God

and with the grace of his love
we both have found a home
in each others hearts

his is etched deep into the soul of my heart
to remind me that our
love
does not stand alone

only possible through the Grace of a higher source...

BrianV (82.40.126.82) -- Wednesday, August 11 2004, 11:30 pm

Questions Answered
Love it. Feel it. Lovely poem! I have asked not for love, but guidance in love and was shown the way. Take comfort in your answer!

Terrie* (65.136.6.165) -- Thursday, August 12 2004, 01:27 am

Brian V, thank you sooo much...
your comment was as sweet and gentle as an angels wing fluttering..oh yes indeed ,i take full comfort in my answer i lost my first love to death ,13 years later God gave me his best gift....HUGS/LOVE

Martin Vann (63.185.81.206) -- Thursday, August 12 2004, 10:29 pm

Oh, The Passion, Of Your Heart...,
Terrie,

You speak of love, seldom known, but it seems to be more than a memory, more like, a close friend, who will never leave you, what more can anyone say or ask of love, but to know you felt its touch.

You are a fortunate and beautiful lady, with the passion of her heart, feeding her thoughts, into her pen, now, her, only.., friend.

MV

Terrie* (65.148.210.141) -- Friday, August 13 2004, 06:11 am

Martin, love is within reach..
if one is open to it...not all my thoughts have made their way to my pen, for there are many just as you ,i keep locked away in my heart ..we may all share of ourselves but we may also choose what we share or reveal, we do not hide just protect it i believe... do you not agree?
i write how another makes me feel..sometimes i just keep them inside and show them how i feel...........

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