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Darn That Crazy Dream
11 August, 2004
Author: Del

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Darn that crazy dream,
It sneaks into my bed every night.
It brings you right besides me,
And you fill me with utter delight.

I'm still breathless when I awake,
And I'm shuddering with ecstasy.
In the darkness of my lonely room,
You make passionate love to me.

I feel your hands caressing my body,
Your lips kissing me everywhere.
Then I stroke your face tenderly,
And I tell you how much I care.

This dark lonely room's silence is broken,
By sighs of the joyous rapture I feel,
Oh, darn this crazy tantalizing dream.
Why can't it some night be real?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.206.121) -- Thursday, August 12 2004, 04:12 am

Del, wheww..

here i thought i only dreamed like that..i guess i.m not alone..don't you just hate it...when you wake up? many times i have felt a warm body on the outside of my covers i turn around ..only to find my canine companion laying next to me haha...But Lord knows how i look forward to the REAL stroke of my man SOON and.......... i love your work!!!this was a great read..HUGS/LOVE
Martin Vann (63.185.64.106) -- Thursday, August 12 2004, 06:19 pm

Someone Out There, She Dreams Of You/2

Del,

If, her passion, is in your heart, don't trade the real thing, for a dream, Yes, Del, I know, this, may be just a dream and if it is, I hope for you and her, you find her, she probably, dreams the same dream, that you do. She is out there, now, let your love take wing, go find her, she is looking for you.

Del, this is a very, honest, heart's beat, shared with us, as a poem. I found mine, now, love enough, give enough, you will find her to, BUT, stay away from mine.

Thanks Del,
MV
MV
Che (71.96.1.135) -- Wednesday, January 22 2014, 04:57 pm

great read great write

I truly enjoyed your words, and you drew me in as I haven't been for a very long time. Thankyou
 
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