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If I Knew
19 August, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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if I knew that
I wouldn't exhaust you
with all the love that I have
I'd share my love in so many ways

if I knew
I'd offer it to you every day as you woke up
I'd give it to you in a note
attached inside your briefcase

if I knew
I'd hire to have it written across the sky
I'd serve it to you with every meal
I'd lather you with it in the shower
write you everyday with something different
and erotic to tell you
and show you what i mean

if I knew
I'd lure you with a smile
and you'd know exactly what I meant
you'd smile back and I'd know
that you crave the same

if I knew
I'd hold your hand up to my heart
and guide you to my breasts
as you caress with your tongue
while your hands continue to explore
and leave with memories
within your heart and your mind
while we are apart
your body would know
just what mine was saying from miles away

if I knew that I wouldn't exhaust you
I'd make love to you right now
together we'd make love in so many ways

we'd hold each other exhausted
and satisfied
and fall fast asleep
if only i knew
that it would exhaust you...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (63.185.64.3) -- Saturday, August 21 2004, 08:52 pm

If, I Ever Meet, A Woman, Like Her...,

Terrie,

If, I ever met a woman, with a heart, that burns from day-light to dark, If, I EVER, meet a woman, like You, well, if I ever meet, a woman like you. You know, the devil raises hell, in his caverns down below, and his fire, burns so hot, it destroys, many souls. Unlike your fire of love, such passion and true, I feel your light. If, I ever, meet a woman, like you, God, I hope, you are there, for this kind of love, would scare a mortal man, So, God, make me, more than I am if, I ever meet a woman, like..............,Her.

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joyce (68.19.178.73) -- Monday, August 23 2004, 01:33 pm

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Terrie this is great..so much emotion..very beautiful writing with alot of feeling....
Terrie* (65.148.207.181) -- Wednesday, October 6 2004, 02:31 am

i'm sure .....

You'll have your chance...
Terrie* (65.148.207.181) -- Wednesday, October 6 2004, 02:33 am

Joyce, thank you...

lots of feeling..oh yea...now i'm exhausted...
 
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