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I Hate The Feeling
20 August, 2004
Author: BrianV

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As the phone goes down
I hate the feeling
of connection
broken.

As I lie in bed
I hate the feeling
of my love
unspoken.

As I wake to morning
I hate the feeling
Of hugs
Not given.

As I walk to work
I hate the feeling
Of hands
Not holding.

As I eat each meal
I hate the feeling
Of days
Not shared.

In all I do
I hate the feeling
Of not being
With you.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.231.163) -- Friday, August 20 2004, 04:55 am

Brian V,i know the feeling too well..

my patience seems to have blown to zero tolerence..yet i still wait..to never be separated from my precious love...whom infected my heart with his love..i know the feeling you paint across...you have a beautiful/romantic way of expressing to touch your readers...keep sharing i enjoy feeling your poetry...
brandy (66.157.35.198) -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 03:53 am

hey

this poem is really good
 
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