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20 August, 2004
Author: Bench

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trust does not reside here anymore
it has been betrayed countless of times
all that is left is a sceptic
miserable and alone

joy does not reside here anymore
it has been dampened and crushed
all that is left is a sad being
tearful and forlorn

hope does not reside here anymore
it has been shot down from its perch
all that is left is a pessimist
uncaring and on his own

love does not reside here anymore
it has been bled dry by infidelity
all that is left is a creature of hate
angry and torn

and now we see a lovely creation
reduced to the lowest of low
so distrustful, so sad,
so hopless, so unloved

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.233.158) -- Friday, August 20 2004, 04:01 pm

Bench..i know the feelin'...

trust is very important in any relationship..hard to get that trust back....this i know..were still friends but nothin' more..
still LOVE him but NOT "IN LOVE" w/him
thanx for sharin'
Ash (63.53.137.128) -- Friday, August 20 2004, 06:07 pm

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I loved this poem. Its excellent, altho i hope its not truly the way u are feeling.
bench (61.9.41.77) -- Monday, August 30 2004, 10:33 am

hey guys!

Thanks terrie and welcome. Yes ash, this is what I am currently feeling.
 
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