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Singing With God Now
22 August, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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Liz loved to sing
she had a gift from God,
but that gift was cruelly
robed,
a judge said she was no good,
for days she sobbed,
now she's up in heaven

Singing with God.

------- Author's Notes -------

this mainly pointed at programes like 'Pop idol', which i think are disgusting, they dont stop and think about what there saying to these young(and old) people, ones word can have such a massive impact on that person, but hey it keeps ratings up!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.212.109) -- Sunday, August 22 2004, 06:08 pm

Hi Ben, makes you wonder huh?

whatever became of constructive criticism that didn't cause emotional scars, some live what they learn...broken hearts from fame..someone must share in the blame..i look forward to your honesty in all your work love...keep 'em rollin' strong.
Ben Franklin (80.6.138.109) -- Monday, August 23 2004, 12:18 am

Terrie*

hi Terrie*, thank you for your warm comments, much love ben
 
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