Love's Confusion by Luc

I'm lost in heaven’s hell,
confused, bewildered, and under a spell,
such sweet pain, pleasure glazed in torture,
tears for hatred? Love? My heart’s butchered.

Days seem so dull, and nights are just so long.
Dreams are no longer sweet, screams fill the night,
tossing and turning, 'cause I cant see your eyes.

Oh what a sweet nightmare, stars going dim,
falling for you, heart aching with sin.
Fingers reaching out, touching nothing but nothing,
eyes are strained, bloodshot for something.

My hands ach, there’re covered in blood,
I have no more tears, and the night’s still young,
I'm lost in time, space, confused,
I’ve lost my grip, and I’ve lost my place,
I'm running a race, I'm sure to lose,
but I keep running, pushing myself,
hurting myself, just for you.

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Thursday, August 26 2004, 02:34 am

You hurt
You hurt yourself, so that he would stay! Good job Luc! Nice metaphor! I love this subject! And I love your objective! Nice Luc!

Love (distance)almost makes you cry out! Real good with words....
Smiles,
Meri

Capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Friday, August 27 2004, 08:58 am

Hi Luc
It is so good to read one of your poems again, Luc. This is fulll of vivid imagery -- good poem

Megan (205.188.116.130) -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 11:20 pm

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Luc ,
great poem from start to finish. i loved it.
-Megan-

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