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Your On In Five....
26 August, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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My bellies going up like tower bridge,
and it also feels like I
got a permanent stich,

see, I got to go on stage soon
to perform my 'spoken word',
a year ago I would of thought all this was
absurd,
now finally Im gonna be
heard,

I wanna open their ears
then open their eyes,
Im honestly not in it to win a
prize,

Im gonna speak about life,
how Harry lost his wife,
how I got stabed in the back by a friend with an emotional
knife,
about how politics will never be fair
and how we need to turn over our priminster Mr.Blair,

I really do hope they will care.

------- Author's Notes -------

This is about me,iVe joined up with a big poetry organisation in london called apples and snakes,and i start a five week course in september leading to a big showcase at the end of it,
scared stiff!!!!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.113.179) -- Friday, August 27 2004, 04:24 pm

Congrats!

Top of the Morning to ya Hush, Hush, sweet Ben! It's now 11:22 a.m. While reading this, a smile flashed across my face, because I remember you showing me that poetry website! You've finally made it! I wish you the best of luck! I hope you get your nerves under control....lol
Since you've made it this far, there's no turning back now, is there? Oh, I just love splendid news such as this!

Hooray! Congratulations! Great job! I"ll see you on in five!
Take care!
Smiles,
Meri
Ben (80.6.138.109) -- Friday, August 27 2004, 08:50 pm

My friend..

thank you so much M,
still warm and loving as ever,
take
care
smelly!
Terrie* (65.136.6.173) -- Saturday, August 28 2004, 03:46 pm

Ben, you'll do just fine sweetie..

you have so much spirit in your poetry..you shine and i can see you glow...from your poetry i sense that you are a caring male and without a doubt when you say you will be there for us as a friend..you will be there for us..cause your always there for us ...you speak what you mean..i admire your work...
Ben Franklin (80.6.138.109) -- Saturday, August 28 2004, 06:56 pm

fingers crossed...

terrie* thank you so much for all your kind comments,
you truly touch my heart
Ben
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