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Breakdowns
27 August, 2004
Author: LinzAy

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I smile out loud
-Can you hear it?
Oh, but when I breakdown
I cry
I think showingly
-Can you see it?
Oh, but when I breakdown
I die

Tragic breakdowns
Horrid breakdowns
I'm now crippled
I'm now weak
Tragic breakdowns
Horrid breakdowns
I've met reality
I've met defeat

I stand confidently
-Won't you believe?
Oh, but when I breakdown
I'm small
I look knowingly
-Can't you believe?
Oh, btu when I breakdown
I fall

Tragic breakdowns
Horrid breakdowns
I'm now crippled
I'm now weak
Tragic breakdowns
Horrid breakdowns
I've met reality
I've met defeat

Hopelessness wash over me
Create that sense of reality
Cause my breakdown
An entire emotional breakdown

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Megan (152.163.252.196) -- Wednesday, September 1 2004, 07:44 pm

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loved it
LinzAy (64.12.116.130) -- Wednesday, September 1 2004, 10:48 pm

Megan

Thanks a bunch! glad you did :)
 
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