Chalkline by Seizure

I'm walking all alone and I'll never see the light
And the wind starts to freeze what will I do tonight?
I never could be saved and I never could have shared
All the pain that is draging me down I'll never be prepared
I'm out here all alone and I'm trying to keep warm
But everytime I start to thaw there is another storm
I know I'm gonna die and I know it's very soon
There is not that much I can see inside the light of the moon

I'm starting to slow down so what the hell im gonna do?
I'll take this gun upside my head and then I'll follow through
The blood will soak the pavement and it will fill up the cracks
You say I've much to live for but you just don't know the facts
I've given it eight years and it's only gotten worse
And now I'm dying slow, so regardless it's my hearse
And now I'll let it go, and now I'll lose the race
And now I'll pull the trigger in search of that place

Ben Franklin (80.6.138.109) -- Saturday, August 28 2004, 11:39 am

touching...
very touching poem seizure, I just hope this is not about you, take care of your self -Ben

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Saturday, August 28 2004, 07:49 pm

He's Back!
Welcome, my poet! It's good to see you up here again! Your rhyming, in every poem you've written has so much depth, and you explain everything so well, you know? Like in lamen's terms.... (I may not have spelled that right)... Don't worry, like I've said, there are people up here who love you and care for you, such as myself... As Ben said, take care! Smiles, -Meri

LinzAy (152.163.252.196) -- Saturday, August 28 2004, 09:12 pm

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Glad you posted Seiz! And I like it very much...vedy vedy much:)

Seizure (68.211.165.82) -- Sunday, August 29 2004, 02:47 am

thanks
Thanks for the nice comments guys. They are appreciated. Nice to be back.

barb (209.112.24.232) -- Sunday, August 29 2004, 04:32 am

So you couldn't stay away from us Haaa
welcome back I missed ticking you off.:))))

Ash (66.195.9.76) -- Sunday, August 29 2004, 02:43 pm

Wow....
This poem was excellent, I just hope its not your real thoughts here.

Seizure (68.211.165.82) -- Sunday, August 29 2004, 05:45 pm

yeah
Barb, it's nice to be missed, regardless of the reason!

Ash, thanks for the comment. You don't have to worry about my suicide at the moment. Not planning on it at the moment.

Martin Vann (63.185.64.207) -- Monday, August 30 2004, 02:26 pm

The Classical Conscience..., Seizure
Seiz,

I'm not being cute here, but, you often write with what I call a, "Classical Conscience," meaning to me, with truth of thought and directness, simple, yet, complex and informative. I on the other hand, the writing hand that is, tend to squeeze words out of a cloud, sometimes it sprinkles, somtimes it pours. Sometimes the words are a hit, but, usually, they are only good enough for the B side of the back of my mind. Then, I read some of your work and see, how deeply you go into yourself and I'm always impressed with the revelations you find and share with us. There are few of us who have not lived one or two lines of every poem you write.

By the way, I enjoyed this work also. My favorite line is "and now I'm dying slow, so regardless it's my hearse." That is a powerful line.

MV

mandy steder (70.226.132.231) -- Thursday, November 30 2006, 08:34 pm

you write my life...
i constantly walk around in a daze, never knowing what is coming or going. i think about everything- and it doesnt matter what the hell is going on around me, i am still out there. sometimes i imagine exactly what you described in your poem. you are amazing, seiz. one track minds, i tell you.
keep up writing what i can never seem to express. you are gifted.
:( mandy steder

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