Decay
29 August, 2004
Author: Seizure
I've lived this life just so long ago
Where pain and hate was all I'd ever know
I vented pain, many times before
I spilled it all and you wanted more
I fit right in, you all liked me here
You never thought I would disappear
I layed it out and life carried on
What joy I had's now forever gone
I'm falling, I'm dying, I'm tired of trying
I earned some respect now everyone's lying
I had high hopes, I reached for the stars
I looked in the mirror I'm covered in scars
There are certain things that are meant to be
It's just too bad that doesn't mean me
I've gone full circle, I've seen my end
The main thing I wanted was to keep a friend
Why do I always try to better what I am
Can't I realize life won't give a damn
I take my fist and shove it through the wall
But what's it change? I will always fall
I know I'm the product of all of your hate
I know my purpose, I know my fate
I asked for your help, you pushed me away
You left me here and watched me decay
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Terrie* (65.150.170.112) -- Sunday, August 29 2004, 01:09 pm Dang seiz, you and your heartfelt words,are ya just checking to see if i'm still producing human tears? lol..sweetie i tell you, your poetry always manages to hit that sensitive nerve on me..i know i'm such a wuss, i'm too girly :) as you know you have plenty of friends here at D.R directly at your screen...and in your heart. and non of us are goin' anywhere ... i read your other posts, they too are outstanding..but then aren't they always..huh..(((Seiz)) glad to have you back again.. |
| Seizure (68.211.165.82) -- Sunday, August 29 2004, 05:39 pm I missed hearing your opinion Terrie. Thanks for checking it out. |
| Terrie* (65.148.210.232) -- Sunday, August 29 2004, 06:15 pm as long as i continue to breathe.. i wouldn't miss my chance commentin' on your exclusive poetry.. |
| barb (216.123.56.105) -- Sunday, August 29 2004, 08:26 pm Your writing is so expressive. ...Just keep the good like your writing and your sensitivity and get rid of the bad. <snip-not about poem> |
| Seizure (68.211.165.82) -- Sunday, August 29 2004, 09:26 pm That's who I am barb. It's kind of hard to drop the bad stuff when that's the only thing you know. I write on what I know. This is all I know. It's who I am. <snip-not about poem> |
| Terrie* (65.148.205.130) -- Sunday, August 29 2004, 11:36 pm i know you don't need anyone speakin' on your behalf seize, no dis to either one of you , but Barb honestly hon... what your saying is take away, strip us from what we lived and learned ..that would be like erasing the fact that we ever existed, i was young at one time i have children seizures age and on an average norm i can understand where he is coming from in his experience in life..through his writing, i think his writings has opened my eyes and made me a better person in viewing the life of another human being.. enjoy and read along w/me..remember we have insights about our life and destiny that no-one sees or tries to get to know..except ones ownself..we all carry scars , we all carry wounds ,we differ in how we express what we write our lifestyles of living and in opinions but isn't it amazingly awesome..how we can breath the same air..and still be so different and unique ? keep writing what you feel seiz.. |
| Ray Ray (198.81.26.73) -- Monday, August 30 2004, 02:06 am Hey my names Ray-Ray (Rachel)... Umm I read your poems alot, but I only commented on 1 before.. but this really good. I like all ur poems tho, especially about ur dad, and growing up, it kinda lets me know I'm not alone, and other ppl deal with it too... theres just so much u say that I connect to, and the way u say it is just awesome... well thats all I wanted to say Ray-Ray |
| Em (203.87.45.209) -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 09:13 am Hey... seizure, you're a very amazing person... i think that with all your experiences good and bad, they have all brought you knowledge and understanding, and it really shows in what you write about... i really admire u m8, you write gr8 work... keep it up xo xo |
| LinzAy (152.163.252.196) -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 07:31 pm Another great writing Seiz! |
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