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She's A Wild One Alright
31 August, 2004
Author: Ben Laney

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It's hard enough
to watch her walk
I see her eyes
and I can't talk
All she's after
is a little fun
She's got me comin'
completely undone

She's a wild one alright
She's a wild one alright
She's sweet to me in the mornin'
She knows how to treat me at night
She's a wild one alright

She doesn't know
my heart is gone
I want to have her
love for my own
I'd follow her
to Tim Buk Tu
And stick by her side
like super-glue

She's as free
as a meadow lark
She spreads her wings
and flies me around the park
No, the girl
is not afraid of the dark
And, oooh her bite
is better than her bark

She's a wild one alright
She's a wild one alright
She's sweet to me in the mornin'
She knows how to treat me at night
She's a wild one alright

------- Author's Notes -------

This is one that I recorded with a little bit of jazz swing to it. I hope you like it! Peas and Hominy, Ben

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.215.227) -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 08:26 pm

Ben, super glue... ?

wild one is she..she gots to be very unique..to have caught your eye...you always impress me w/your work..
guess w/you super glue ,anyone is bound to get stuck to your heart..as i am..keep them rollin' hun..
Megan (205.188.116.130) -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 11:52 pm

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What you have wrote sounds like a lot of fun, and I bet it would make an awesome song. The she in your poem, sounds like somebody most people would be drawn right into.
-megan-
Ben Laney (68.127.169.72) -- Wednesday, September 1 2004, 07:12 pm

Terrie*, Love is the glue that...

Terrie*, Love is the glue that that turns your mind to goo...makes one wonder what to do...oh, if only someone would sell me a clue! Thank you, girlfriend, I am glad this one left an impression on you, and I'm happy that you told me, too! May you have a real good day, Ben
Ben Laney (68.127.169.72) -- Wednesday, September 1 2004, 07:23 pm

Megan, the "she" in the song is..

Megan, the "she" in the song is a Wild One Alright! Haa! Haaa! I am pleased to know you got a sense of fun from this writing, and I thank you soooo much for your comment, I really appreciate it! Peas and Hominy & Smiles to you, Ben {}:~)=
 
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