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I Have An Idea!
3 September, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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I'm going in to give it to you straight,
I'm not going to save the world
one person can't,

but to take a look at ourselves
is a very big step,
it's a HUGE one,
and you might trip up that step many times,
but dont worry its not a crime,
just as long as you get back up
and dust the negativity off your shoulder
and shout out loud........
..IM NOT GONNA BE KNOCKED DOWN ANYMORE!

You see once we all look at ourselves
we can make this planet more like Heaven
instead of
Hell.

------- Author's Notes -------

Just an idea!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Natalie Leer (194.82.83.250) -- Tuesday, September 28 2004, 03:13 pm

Believe

Self belief, belief in other people, belief that we can make a difference. Three of the most important things in allowing us to change the world around us without lacking apreciation for the beauty of day to day life.

This is something, I think, that everyone can relate to. Trying to find that space in your mind to understand yourself.

Great poem Ben
 
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